6) On Morgan Mathien Article 5: Road-trip from hell
There is no article. There is an article 4 and an article 6 but no 5. I don’t know if you know it or not or if word press glitched like it did to me.
7) On Narain Inuganti Majors that affect admittance into Law Schools
I love watching Law and Order, my favorite of the franchise is Law and Order: SVU, however there are substantial differences between what you see on t.v. and being a lawyer in reality. There are a few grammar mistakes, words left out or are even redundant which interrupts your flow. I think you should really consider rereading your work before posting. An example is the following sentence taken from the first paragraph “When I applied to colleges, a majority of them I went in decided as a pre-law major’. I may not be majoring in pre-law but the statement that law schools don’t take to kindly to pre-law majors is weird, why not? I mean one would think if you want to be a lawyer the first thing in pre-law, then graduate school so it is definitely something worth exploring. Why would someone waste all this money going to school to find out that their major won’t cut it for what they want to do with their life.
8) On Narain Inuganti About Page
I actually played Ultimate Frisbee for the first time at UT, last fall. There are teams that you can request to join on imleagues.com, just make sure to find UT. So if you haven’t checked out it might be worth it to try. Last fall the games were on Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday I remember because that was my part time semester and the only days I stayed in Tampa. It was really fun, met some new people and broke out of the same circle of people.
9) On Melissa Meiselman’s Article 12: Review of Children’s Movies
When I saw the Finding Nemo Picture, I literally gasped with excitement. I love that movie, I realize that it is animated but the scenes come from real pictures. There is a squeal coming out call Finding Dory in 2014. As for Toy Story I grew up watching toy story and the last movie in the franchise I think it was kind of geared to the kids who grew up with the Toy Story franchise because Andy is off to college as were we. I remember the first time I saw up, I had recorded it on my DVR and I watched it as I was packing for college, the day before I had to leave I am a huge procrastinator. These are movies kids should definitely watch. I don’t believe these movies will ever be to old for kids to enjoy.
10) On Melissa Meiselman’s Beach Adventures: Article 7
Your friend Sam is an incredible artist! How did she even begin to make the mermaid? How long it did take her? If I hadn’t seen it with my own eyes I would never believe it. Your heart is also amazing. You could probably work with clay. There is this clay at walmart in the crafts section, you make whatever you want and then when you’re done, you put it in the oven to harden it, reminds me of shrinky dinks.(I don’t know if I spelled that right). I think its a great way to bring out the artist inside. I https://scontent-a-dfw.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash4/2021_521884754496180_1074155869_n.jpg This is just a picture or the lions my sister and I created with the clay, mine is the deformed hotdog looking one, but I made an amazing bird and a drediel.